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Yellow Harbor |
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Deep melodic track, hope you enjoy it  |
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 cyanghost109 (trance) |
17 Jun. 2012 |
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Greetings!
The introduction sounds pretty good! It starts off giving a good impression to the song. The beat is awesome! The beat comes in and it's full of bass and it's nice and solid! Ok, so nice job so far! The progression is starting to become noticeable. The first breakdown comes in at this point. It came in a little too fast I think. You should have kept the beat going without a breakdown quite yet.
After that, you bring the beat back and the song is up and running again. I really like the melody! It's pretty dark and quiet, but that's just what I like about it! The beat mixed with the samples makes this sound awesome! At about half way through the song, we have another breakdown. This would be an appropriate place to put a breakdown. Thankfully, they are short. 
In this part, I hear the melody change up a little bit. Not much though. It's still quiet and has the same atmosphere. It's changing though, and that adds variety instead of looping the song over and over again to the point of a repetitious song.
The song has a short breakdown at about 3/4 of the way through. At this point, I'm guessing that this will be either another changing point of the song or the beginning of an outro. Either way, I like how you totally broke the previous sound and gave it a rest to introduce something a little different. Again, this adds variety keeping the listener waiting for more.
You start the beat back up again and bring in the outro. It sounds awesome! You took out most of the original assets of the song and just had a beat going with few samples to give it a good ending feel. Let's conclude this piece...
Some major pros to point out are that the variety was awesome! Instead of looping the song over and over again (as I've mentioned above) you continued to change it up mildly throughout without making it sound like a completely different song. The arrangement was also well done. The bass was also a major aspect here. That mixed with the beat made this very danceable thus enjoyable IMO. The overall structure was awesome as well!
There really aren't any major cons but I do have something to throw out there. In the beginning, you had the intro going. Great. Then you brought in the beat. Also great. Suddenly, only after a few seconds of a beat, you brought in a breakdown which I think as unnecessary. Instead of doing that, you should have kept the beat going while mildly progressing the song. The breakdowns throughout the rest of the song were definitely appropriate! They were quick and yet allowed the song to progress!
Overall, this was a good track! It was dark, danceable, and is just a well structured piece altogether. |
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8.5 |
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Total downloads: |
39 |
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This week downloads: |
0 |
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Current chart´s position: |
Not on charts. |
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Best chart´s position: |
2nd |
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