|Very nice melodies in this song, and I love the concept of it all... but the vocals..
For a first try, I think it's great, but next time you should completely avoid using flanger on the vocal. Also, vocals rarely need to be panned this much.. usually they pan only to create a short effect.
Don't be ashamed of your voice.. don't hide it behind effects.
Hope this helps.. Good luck!
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