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Louigi Verona
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Write new replyWed 14 Apr. 2004 (18:28) [217.23.128.158] 1/4 quick link
Yo!
My first singin' experience. It's more pop then rap, but anyway check it out.

http://www.verona.alfcomp.ru/music/MyOwnRoom.mp3
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acecream
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Write new replyWed 14 Apr. 2004 (19:59) [193.77.233.12] 2/4 quick link
Looking from musical aspect the song is nice and melodic with some interesting variants, but vocals ... well somehow they didnt convince me.
At the begining they shouldnt be panned that muchi think and i think you put to much flanger over them. When drums play together with vocals i have this feeling that timing simply isnt right (the fast vocals part). But i would say this is nice specialy considering this is your first vocal tryout.
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Louigi Verona
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Write new replyThu 15 Apr. 2004 (8:27) [217.23.128.206] 3/4 quick link
Yep, you always get your first song crappy. But hey - that's life! I think my next one will be better. Or maybe even worst hehe
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Write new replyThu 15 Apr. 2004 (9:09) [134.47.109.182] 4/4 quick link
Very nice melodies in this song, and I love the concept of it all... but the vocals.. :no:

For a first try, I think it's great, but next time you should completely avoid using flanger on the vocal. Also, vocals rarely need to be panned this much.. usually they pan only to create a short effect.

Don't be ashamed of your voice.. don't hide it behind effects.


Hope this helps.. Good luck! ;) :up:
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